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I Want to Be A Volunteer of Protecting Animals

A very good morning / afternoon to you all ,everyone.My name is XXX,a student from XXX Middle School.As we know,animals are our good friends.Hower,as we can see,some animals,especially rare animals,are becoming fewer and fewer.

In order to protect these animals,I want to be a volunteer。I am active and out-going.I like animals,such as cats,dogs,rabits as well as everything related to animals,like newspapers,magazines and videos.I often take part in the activities of protecing animals.For example, last month I presented a show called Stopping Hunting.Many people came and supported me.

To be a good volunteer,I need to do more,I will read some books about animals.Meanwhile,I will join a club whose aim is to protect animals.

I believe I can do the work well,I hope you can give me the chance.

That's all.Thank you.

解析

這是一篇命題作文，寫一封推薦信推薦自己。寫作中注意將自己的情況介紹清楚并表達自己參加比賽的意愿。在寫作時要注意時態，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規范性。結合材料可知本文主要是一般現在及將來時態，第一人稱。寫作中適當使用連詞，序數詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

點評：注意寫作中的時態、人稱和數的問題，時態一般是一般現在時態，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。

知識點

小作文的定義

小作文：

多指便條、請假條等，在寫作的時候要注意文章的格式（稱呼、正文、簽名、日期）。